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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv21yr
2023-05-28 22:19

Tch already feeling this is going to be trash with him not knowing cote and that nerf system and looking at the romance tag we are in for harem in cote likeness is fine to girls who are obsessively in love with him but no love and naive dumb si._.mp protagonist ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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bananaphone
bananaphoneAuthor

Let me cook

Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Sure buddy you do you if it's really good ill delete the review

bananaphone:Let me cook
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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Wow he is going pretty good btw he should be atleast capable fighter cause even if he didn't get the skill he has photographic memory and unrivaled potential for both body and mind but I do hope you give him Fighting skill next that include hand to hand, firearm and cold steel knowledge

bananaphone:Let me cook
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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

And you're doing great he doesn't care that much about his new 'parents' you and I know it would be disgusting for him to acknowledge as one their are allot of reincarnation fanfic with fake family love drama which is disgusting that it makes me want to puke cuz you know that kind of things aren't real they are human too If I were in the place of any of the protagonist I wouldn't acknowledge anyone as my parents other then my first lifes one and if the reincarnation parents treat me kindly Ill treat them the same and if they change and starts getting all authorative I would straight up leave if I have financial support or if they change in a bad way then I wouldn't really gim a dim about them

bananaphone:Let me cook
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Taro
TaroLv15

Wow.. I don’t even know how to respond. That is like the worst fear of every parent who adopts a child. And step kids who actually view step parents as real parents too. I hate stories where the character refuses to accept new parents personally. That makes me sick. It shows that the do not deserve a second chance at life if all they care about is the first and won’t even give the new filial love.

Genesis_999:And you're doing great he doesn't care that much about his new 'parents' you and I know it would be disgusting for him to acknowledge as one their are allot of reincarnation fanfic with fake family love drama which is disgusting that it makes me want to puke cuz you know that kind of things aren't real they are human too If I were in the place of any of the protagonist I wouldn't acknowledge anyone as my parents other then my first lifes one and if the reincarnation parents treat me kindly Ill treat them the same and if they change and starts getting all authorative I would straight up leave if I have financial support or if they change in a bad way then I wouldn't really gim a dim about them
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Bruh i dont mean about orphans or about someone with bad parents who are child abusers like seriously f off

Taro:Wow.. I don’t even know how to respond. That is like the worst fear of every parent who adopts a child. And step kids who actually view step parents as real parents too. I hate stories where the character refuses to accept new parents personally. That makes me sick. It shows that the do not deserve a second chance at life if all they care about is the first and won’t even give the new filial love.
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

You're right, I grew up with uncles and grandparents and I consider them second parents. I really don't understand those mc who like to consider their second parents as strangers and then complain that they can't trust anyone since they approach only out of interest

Taro:Wow.. I don’t even know how to respond. That is like the worst fear of every parent who adopts a child. And step kids who actually view step parents as real parents too. I hate stories where the character refuses to accept new parents personally. That makes me sick. It shows that the do not deserve a second chance at life if all they care about is the first and won’t even give the new filial love.
bananaphone
bananaphoneAuthor

Haters gonna hate. Germany’s gonna invade Poland.

Genesis_999:Sure buddy you do you if it's really good ill delete the review
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Well it wasn't hate comment. just there aren’t alot of cote fanfic and I’ve seen many fanfic with good start but end up being trashy well. was i in the wrong to review just so you wouldn’d make your fanfic trashy?

bananaphone:Haters gonna hate. Germany’s gonna invade Poland.
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bananaphone
bananaphoneAuthor

I mean you were not in the wrong, but I can't take what you said seriously since I already had a stockpile of chapters and planned it out. So (hopefully) none of your concerns would have come to fruition anyway. Will you still like it? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. With that said you are still an unreal pessimist.

Genesis_999:Well it wasn't hate comment. just there aren’t alot of cote fanfic and I’ve seen many fanfic with good start but end up being trashy well. was i in the wrong to review just so you wouldn’d make your fanfic trashy?
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Not really being a pessimist bro only telling and seeing the things way they are. Like bruh I already learned not to expect rather get my expectation high for a novel or fanfics cause I've been disappointed many times and many were premium (have to buy the chapters) but well I've read more great fanfic and novel too but they are finished or ongoing

bananaphone:I mean you were not in the wrong, but I can't take what you said seriously since I already had a stockpile of chapters and planned it out. So (hopefully) none of your concerns would have come to fruition anyway. Will you still like it? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. With that said you are still an unreal pessimist.
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Well if it really is trash then I'll leave a review for others and leave cause I don't really care I mean I'm excited to read a cote fanfic but if it's trash it's just a waste of time

bananaphone:I mean you were not in the wrong, but I can't take what you said seriously since I already had a stockpile of chapters and planned it out. So (hopefully) none of your concerns would have come to fruition anyway. Will you still like it? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. With that said you are still an unreal pessimist.
bananaphone
bananaphoneAuthor

You literally are a pessimist, you believe that the worst will happen, even though it might be backed by experience. If you want me to take a future review more seriously then criticize it for what it is rather than what you think it might become.

Genesis_999:Well if it really is trash then I'll leave a review for others and leave cause I don't really care I mean I'm excited to read a cote fanfic but if it's trash it's just a waste of time
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

You are saying that but I do wonder if you can keep talking after you finish or atleast try to finish it cuz it's seems you drop a novel everytime every dog can bark bru-h lol I'll wait to see if you can really write this fanfic to be good enough Good Luck and Fighting

bananaphone:You literally are a pessimist, you believe that the worst will happen, even though it might be backed by experience. If you want me to take a future review more seriously then criticize it for what it is rather than what you think it might become.
General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3

uN_Joohn
uN_JoohnLv12

Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

bananaphone:Let me cook
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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

You look like a really nice guy supporting someone like him who has no real life just like you so I guess that’s why you wanted to support him, right? ^~^

bananaphone:Haters gonna hate. Germany’s gonna invade Poland.
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bananaphone
bananaphoneAuthor

💢🎅

Genesis_999:You look like a really nice guy supporting someone like him who has no real life just like you so I guess that’s why you wanted to support him, right? ^~^
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bananaphone
bananaphoneAuthor

Genesis_999:You look like a really nice guy supporting someone like him who has no real life just like you so I guess that’s why you wanted to support him, right? ^~^
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