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Drako_0692
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2023-07-10 02:12

The Chinese stories are all of the same formula since the writers have no life of their own but this one happens, the boy reincarnates as a god of creation but decides to live a life of any minor character

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dm95
dm95Author

bro read the story properly, he may be reincarnated as a god of creation, but he lost his plates and is weaker. If he had all the powers of god of creation, then story would have ended at 1st chapter.

Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

I still stand by it, what's the point of being some stupid all-powerful god of creation to fill an inferiority complex?

dm95:bro read the story properly, he may be reincarnated as a god of creation, but he lost his plates and is weaker. If he had all the powers of god of creation, then story would have ended at 1st chapter.
AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

I agree on the general point.

Efthee
EftheeLv14

but he doesn't start as Uber powerful, we don't even know if he can use haki or anything. meh some people have their preference but come now, this doesn't deserve a one star review, if you don't like it just say so but don't make it the story's fault.

Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

It's the same lousy plot that everyone exploits proven powers that destroy already imposed logic, an obsession to be the strongest with no apparent logic, and a young master persona even though he has accomplished nothing himself.

Efthee:but he doesn't start as Uber powerful, we don't even know if he can use haki or anything. meh some people have their preference but come now, this doesn't deserve a one star review, if you don't like it just say so but don't make it the story's fault.
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

even the author knows that turning your protagonist into a stupid god of creation was a bad idea. The most inconsistent thing is that the idiot has at least 2 ways to get his powers but ignores it for the benefit of the plot.

dm95:bro read the story properly, he may be reincarnated as a god of creation, but he lost his plates and is weaker. If he had all the powers of god of creation, then story would have ended at 1st chapter.
dm95
dm95Author

why don't you share how he can get his powers back?

Drako_0692:even the author knows that turning your protagonist into a stupid god of creation was a bad idea. The most inconsistent thing is that the idiot has at least 2 ways to get his powers but ignores it for the benefit of the plot.
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

For starters: the guy flies, he can create a cult by giving power in exchange for the tablets, the idiot can fly, use alakazam to teleport, use flight, he can use a ghost to gather them together, he can mind control people to look for them , did I mention that the idiot can fly and look for them without problem?

dm95:bro read the story properly, he may be reincarnated as a god of creation, but he lost his plates and is weaker. If he had all the powers of god of creation, then story would have ended at 1st chapter.
dm95
dm95Author

that's why i said read the story properly, what look for himself, do you even know how big and dangerous one piece world is, and some plates may also be with world government, are they just going to watch like idiots while he steal plates from them.

Drako_0692:For starters: the guy flies, he can create a cult by giving power in exchange for the tablets, the idiot can fly, use alakazam to teleport, use flight, he can use a ghost to gather them together, he can mind control people to look for them , did I mention that the idiot can fly and look for them without problem?
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

mind control forget it? The idiot doesn't look for the one piece ones, he doesn't need to be crowned the most powerful, it's enough to steal them and he has skills to spare for that.

dm95:that's why i said read the story properly, what look for himself, do you even know how big and dangerous one piece world is, and some plates may also be with world government, are they just going to watch like idiots while he steal plates from them.
Saint_VainGlory
Saint_VainGloryLv3

Your complains are unreasonable. Think… You are too impatient to read properly. The mc can fly? Yes he can... but why do it when others can for you? Why go around punching Garp, slapping sungoku and becoming fist bros with white beard. Each fight or encounter just gives people/ world government more information about him. Pest will constantly challenge, try to capture him or even hide away the plates when they get wind that it makes him stronger. It creates unnecessary drama. One where the whole world hunts him down because the world government gets a better understanding of his bloodline or unique powers.

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