Review Detail of Yalatola in She's my Stripper, He's my Stalker

The plot is interesting but in my opinion this kind of story is very psychological, every scene isn't bad but i would like to feel more the background, like knowing how it feels for the mc or any other to be in the strip club or put the attention on how when she was stalking in the alley the atmosphere is terrifying. Also i suggest you tu use Grammarly app, it will help to correct each grammatical errors also I'm not an expert but maybe using titles instead of "chapter x" would be better