Confusing one moment, you're reading the vampire Lords pov, then next you're reading about players taking on quests. For example, one moment, the vampire is interacting with x character, and the next chapter x character is doing something entirely else that does not follow the previous chapter
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LIKEI understand that the initial storytelling approach may initially confuse readers. However, rest assured that the narrative structure is designed to provide a comprehensive worldbuilding experience from different perspectives, both from the NPCs and the players. While there may be multiple storylines and perspectives, the overall plot is interconnected, with each arc culminating and seamlessly merging into the main storyline involving the MC. Each arc will have its own resolution before transitioning back to the progression of the MC's journey. The plot will not solely revolve around the MC awakening, battling monsters, leveling up, and bam, suddenly becoming the Vampire Lord. Instead, it aims to create a narrative reminiscent of popular light novels like "Overl*rd," where the story unfolds in an intricate and expansive manner. Anyway thanks for the review and critisism, I really apreciated it.
Pithecantrophus:I understand that the initial storytelling approach may initially confuse readers. However, rest assured that the narrative structure is designed to provide a comprehensive worldbuilding experience from different perspectives, both from the NPCs and the players. While there may be multiple storylines and perspectives, the overall plot is interconnected, with each arc culminating and seamlessly merging into the main storyline involving the MC. Each arc will have its own resolution before transitioning back to the progression of the MC's journey. The plot will not solely revolve around the MC awakening, battling monsters, leveling up, and bam, suddenly becoming the Vampire Lord. Instead, it aims to create a narrative reminiscent of popular light novels like "Overl*rd," where the story unfolds in an intricate and expansive manner. Anyway thanks for the review and critisism, I really apreciated it.