Honestly I came with high expectations because the synopsis made me hyped, but it was very disappointing, as it is a translation of MTL there are several Chinese terms that are out of place in the dialogues, there was zero originality so far and several dialogues taken from the films that should be "references " but it's boring to read considering that in a fanfic we want to see original things happening, the dialogue between the MC and tony is very strange in the sense that it's practically "robotic" I think the author wanted to make the two look like geniuses that respect each other but no emotional ties, but it was poorly executed, the author was also incapable of writing well the way Tony talks, it basically sounds like someone else There are several chapters, but most of them are just things we already know and nothing really happening Besides, the protagonist basically has no personality, he's just a cliche super genius who can do anything and that's it. I thought the idea had a lot of potential, it was just poorly executed
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Wth is this review did you even read it?? If this is mtl then I want whatever mtl you've been reading. Pretty much 99.9% is good with one or two errors, plot wise pretty much follows iron man with the MC making minor changes and adding inventions... Now that iron man one is over at chapter 45ish the MC is now developing into the avengers plot and seems pretty unique so far.... Its a good marvel fan fiction with good writing 4/5
It literally says in the description that it's an mtl.
AnAxeToGrind:Wth is this review did you even read it?? If this is mtl then I want whatever mtl you've been reading. Pretty much 99.9% is good with one or two errors, plot wise pretty much follows iron man with the MC making minor changes and adding inventions... Now that iron man one is over at chapter 45ish the MC is now developing into the avengers plot and seems pretty unique so far.... Its a good marvel fan fiction with good writing 4/5
didn't you read the description?
AnAxeToGrind:Wth is this review did you even read it?? If this is mtl then I want whatever mtl you've been reading. Pretty much 99.9% is good with one or two errors, plot wise pretty much follows iron man with the MC making minor changes and adding inventions... Now that iron man one is over at chapter 45ish the MC is now developing into the avengers plot and seems pretty unique so far.... Its a good marvel fan fiction with good writing 4/5
didn't you read the description?
AnAxeToGrind:Wth is this review did you even read it?? If this is mtl then I want whatever mtl you've been reading. Pretty much 99.9% is good with one or two errors, plot wise pretty much follows iron man with the MC making minor changes and adding inventions... Now that iron man one is over at chapter 45ish the MC is now developing into the avengers plot and seems pretty unique so far.... Its a good marvel fan fiction with good writing 4/5
didn't you read the description?
AnAxeToGrind:Wth is this review did you even read it?? If this is mtl then I want whatever mtl you've been reading. Pretty much 99.9% is good with one or two errors, plot wise pretty much follows iron man with the MC making minor changes and adding inventions... Now that iron man one is over at chapter 45ish the MC is now developing into the avengers plot and seems pretty unique so far.... Its a good marvel fan fiction with good writing 4/5
didn't you read the description?
AnAxeToGrind:Wth is this review did you even read it?? If this is mtl then I want whatever mtl you've been reading. Pretty much 99.9% is good with one or two errors, plot wise pretty much follows iron man with the MC making minor changes and adding inventions... Now that iron man one is over at chapter 45ish the MC is now developing into the avengers plot and seems pretty unique so far.... Its a good marvel fan fiction with good writing 4/5
I know it says its mtl but it don't read like an mtl? Have you ever tried to read an mtl, its like having your brain punched.
You guys are acting like its unreadable trash like usual mtl, if the author didn't state it was mtl edited by an AI you wouldn't be able to tell because its so well written. The original review is acting like there are multiple mistakes in every paragraph and you can barely understand what's going on, as a fanfic this is pretty good for what it says its going to be.
it's Chinese
SonoBello:it's Chinese
It's pretty noticeably an mtl, even without knowing so beforehand. I started reading without seeing that part and went back to check the description later because the writing was off. It's got the peanut gallery, the weird grammar, the excessive use of exclamation points, the unnatural dialogue, and a few (but I'll give it credit, not a lot of) the standard cliches. It's pretty obviously an mtl even if you skipped that part of the summery.
AnAxeToGrind:You guys are acting like its unreadable trash like usual mtl, if the author didn't state it was mtl edited by an AI you wouldn't be able to tell because its so well written. The original review is acting like there are multiple mistakes in every paragraph and you can barely understand what's going on, as a fanfic this is pretty good for what it says its going to be.
dont blame him, his just translator who tries his best, his not the original author, sory
