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Joe_momma
Joe_mommaLv41yr
2023-05-31 06:48

Its a pocket hunting dimension fanfic. I already know it is gonna be peak

DC - Pocket Hunting Dimension

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NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14

I like the concept of this novel. However you have failed in everything else. First the MC is brain dead hero complex. Why eat the orbs at hospital you should of just waited to be discharge then use the orbs. Second why are you doing stunts out of your window oh.... so everyone can know you have changed an make a target of yourself. Third you should at least have the MC make smart decision an if you can't then make sure MC doesn't make bad decisions.

1yr

Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv2

MC has a serious problem of pulling undeserved and inexplicable powers out of nowhere while he way too weak. If you're writing a fanfic with the DC universe, use the DC opportunities for that kind of thing. Then the 'mind' inspiration orbs can be used to improve stuff from then on. Also MC wants to plagiarise media from IRL for money which is a red flag for him getting rich without deserving it because he remembers every song and book word for word and note for note guys!

1yr
BrilliantStar
BrilliantStarLv4

author..is the cultivation system of pocket hunting dimension brought or is just the dimension itself.

1yr
Charlotte_Mage
Charlotte_MageLv14

us there any romance? if yes will their be harem? cause he should be strong enough for one and the various races don't oppose polygamy.

1yr
Profound_deity
Profound_deityLv14

I really don’t understand the point of constantly making new fics just to drop them after 10 or so chapters.

1yr
Abayomi_Yusuf
Abayomi_YusufLv3

Only 8 chapters to date but this work has amazing potential. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it

1yr
brayan_gonzalez_3523
brayan_gonzalez_3523Lv1

Me gusta este fanfic, aunque hay algunas cosas un poco cuestionables con respecto a temas de DC y pocket hunting, son cosas que se pueden pasar por alto y pues le dan ese toque de originalidad del autor, se disfruta leyendo este tipo de historias, no lo dejes caer

1yr
the_banana_catfrfr
the_banana_catfrfrLv1

the idea is good but the execution is horrible not to mention there so many issues with the plot like I get you want to progress the story but the way your doing this is just horrible

1yr
Jose_Nicolas_Mejia
Jose_Nicolas_MejiaLv1

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1yr
GeshaKun
GeshaKunLv4

Hey, it might not be perfect but it's still good. Probably the only downside is the choices of the MC. Well, you gotta understand though that not all MC's are gonna be perfect. A 8.5/10 IMHO

1yr
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