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Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv311mthHasan_Shopnil

The fic is awesome. Let MC achieve Tail Weakness Removal,Oozaru Control,Ikari/Wrathful State,False SSJ,Spirit Bomb SSJ,SSJ1 Full Power Kaioken,SSJ grade2&3(Perfected),SSJ2(Mastered),SSJ3 Full Power Unleashed,Ultimate State/Potential Unleashed/Mystic Form(Gohan),Evil Saiyan(Turles),Super Saiyan God,Super Full Power Saiyan 4 Limit Breaker,Super Saiyan Rage(Future Trunks),Spirit Bomb Super Trunks,SSGSS Blue(Controled Berserk),SSGSS Blue Kaioken x20,SSGSS Blue Evolution,Legendary Super Saiyan Full Power(Broly),LSSJ2(Kefla),Beast Saiyan(Gohan Beast),Ultra Ego,Perfected Mastered Ultra Instinct,All Forms Merged etc. MC should wish for Eternal Youth,Lifespan Extention&Expansion,Birth/Sperm Fertility/Pregnency Control,Disease Immunity,Space Survivability,Underwater Breathing,Eternal Youth&Disease Immunity for Whomever Girls MC had Seggss with and they will not betray him nor have seggss with others except LGTB and please let the romance&seggss be realistic so NO ahegao and NTR,MC could recreate/Modufy his Body with Cells/DNA from Previous Broly,New Broly,Evil Saiyan Turles,Cumber,Goku,Vegeta,Gohan,Gogeta,Vegeta,Bardock,Kefla,Future Trunks,Gotenks and Other Known Saiyans various Transformations till Now without any Bodily defect,errors and problems,MC could wish for the Knowledge of DB Character's Techniques till Now,MC could get Hoi-Pui Capsule tech,Upgraded Scouter(no tracker),Upgraded Saiyan Suit,Upgraded Spaceship with Co-ordinates of Earth,Namek,Yardrat,Metamor,Cereal and Capsule tech,Healing Pod,Big Gete Star Chip,Dr.Myuu,Dr.Gero,#21,Fuu,Towa scientific Computer Data,Hoi-Pui capsule demension to grow Senzu Beans,Tree of Might Fruit,King Yemma Fruit much faster without harming any Planet,Gravity-Pressure-Temperature-Hyperbolic Training Space-Time Chamber(Portable) etc. Also Please Add DB Fillers,Movies,Manga,Video Games,early DB,DB Z,DB Super,DB GT,DB Heroes,Super DB Heroes,DBZ Kakkarot,DB Xenoverse1&2 Plot,Characters,Transformations,Techniques in this Fic. MC could add girls like Launch,Colonel Violet,Bulma,Tights,Android #18/Lazuli,Pie Pie Mermaid,Android #21/Vomi,Kefla(Caulifla and Kale),West Supreme Kai,Chronoa,Aeos,Lagss,Vidro,Kamin,Towa,Robelu,Vados,Kusu,Zangya,Sheela,Macki,Muezli,Ranfan,Eresa,Maron,Mai,Yurin,Marcarita,Annin,Angela,Aurora,Bikal,Rylibeu,Ribrianne,Kakunsa,Roasie,Akane Kamidori,Aoi Kamidori,Caway,Chao,Cheelai,Niyusu,Chico,Chuu Lee,Coco,Cocoa Amaguri,Cocotte,Cynthia,Dercori,Ena,Princess Snake,Fairy,Fanfan,Fasha,Gine,Fyler,Rulah,Galena,Haru Haru,Shun Shun,Hasky,Pasta,Haya,Heles,Hijiki,Hop,Iwaza,Miza,Kikaza,Videl,July,Kooky Cook,Leena,Leggings,Lime,Suno,Mamba,Xeno Oceanus Shenron,Melee,Miss Piiza,Mint,Mizore,Momo-Chan,Nain,Nion,Nico,Note,Pansy,Pare,PaoPao,Penne Macareni,Plamo,Pocawatha,Polly Bucket,Princess Misa,Princess of the Flower Country,Putine,Saria,Sorrel,Sargent Nutz,Sho,Tanmen,Titima,Tranpire,Tsururin Tsun,Valese,Viola,Wairu,Chi Chi,Bikini/Panchy etc.in his harem but Please make the Romance and Seggs scenes Realistic,so No ahegao and Specially no NTR and Please wish for Birth/Fertility Control and Eternal Youth and Disease Immunity for you and the girls you have Seggss with.(These are just Some of the Beautiful Dragon Ball Female Characters List)

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Kile
KileLv15Kile

vile is honestly too nice of a word

driveknight
driveknightLv4driveknight

and you should seek professional help

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

Send me Money and Travel fees and also send me the Professional's address,I'll consider It.

driveknight:and you should seek professional help
Vastoking
VastokingLv5Vastoking

You disgust me, at the sametime you rly feel "strongly" for harem, so idk it sorta reduces it all

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

I like harem but It should be realistic not like MC meets a female and then they had seggss without any reason,Also If I disgust you I still won't mind cause I have my own preferences and you have yours.

Vastoking:You disgust me, at the sametime you rly feel "strongly" for harem, so idk it sorta reduces it all
Iamurdad69
Iamurdad69Lv12Iamurdad69

Bhai As a fellow Bangladeshi I am disappointed in your bio. You like LGBT ☹️. Bangladeshi name e kolonko tui. Hala

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

So what? Everyone has different preferences. I detest Yaoi,NTR and Stuff like that but LGBT is standable as I do not detest reading Novel about female leads and their love interest being other females,What's so bad about that? Also stuff cursing me,In the entire Bangladesh and the entire world different people has different likes and dislikes and If I could tolerate LGBT then what's your problem in It,Also stop dragging my nationality here,It’s just preferences,Could you guarantee that you never ever read any LGBT fanfic novel?

Iamurdad69:Bhai As a fellow Bangladeshi I am disappointed in your bio. You like LGBT ☹️. Bangladeshi name e kolonko tui. Hala
Karyk
KarykLv4Karyk

Professional degenerate

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

🙄

Hasan_Shopnil:Send me Money and Travel fees and also send me the Professional's address,I'll consider It.
SonoBello
SonoBelloLv4SonoBello

In your tongue exists punctuation? Beacuse I was about to comment about it (in your comment it's all wrong) but then it came to my mind to search your alphabet and I found out that you use scripts to write. Now I'm curious

Kevin_Pollard
Kevin_PollardLv4Kevin_Pollard

RoyalJest
RoyalJestLv2RoyalJest

You've earned this, degenerate award

DaoistLflweQ
DaoistLflweQLv4DaoistLflweQ

Degenerate allert

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

🙄

DaoistLflweQ:Degenerate allert
Pollo118
Pollo118Lv1Pollo118

When someone sees a Good fanfiction without a Harem.

Kile
KileLv15Kile

bro this is vile 💀

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

What's so Vile about my suggestions? I'm not talking about having Everything at Once,MC should have everything gradually as the fic Progresses,also Most of my suggestions make sense and I've posted these suggestions after Properly Contemplating If they are Possible or Not and Guess What,They're Possible and Totally Logical and Doesn't Break World's Limit nor make the Story Uninteresting If Applied correctly.(Also I was too excited and too optimistic about this Fic when I Posted My Suggestions) Lastly,My suggestions could be used as reference and viewed like a Fandom.Com/Wiki Page of Specific Anime Character's Powers and Abilities list which I compiled together. So,I ask again What's VILE?What doesn’t Make Sense?

Kile:bro this is vile 💀
Kile
KileLv15Kile

1. the way you see no problem with telling someone how to write their entire story so that you specifically will like it.. atp write your own story 2. the hypocritical nature of saying you saying you don’t mind lgbt only if it’s between two women was absolutely disgusting 3. the EXTENCIVE list of all the women you want the mc to be with while keeping it “romantic and realistic” touch grass expeditiously

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

🙄 If I want to write a fic then I want to include all Fillers,Movies,Games,Novels (Plot and Characters) in It not just Anime/Canon but that's supremely Hard and too much work and I don't Have High IQ and Eiditic Memory so I just suggest my preferences,that's all. Plus It’s boring to write as I already know my own Story Plot,It becomes boring,So I dropped the Idea of ever writing instead I enjoy fanfics and sometimes give suggestions but sometimes If the fic gets me too excited and I like the Fic too much then I tend to get carried away and write too much in my suggestions about my preferences but I mostly think thoroghly If those Powers are Possible or not,If they are compatible with MC or not etc.

Kile:1. the way you see no problem with telling someone how to write their entire story so that you specifically will like it.. atp write your own story 2. the hypocritical nature of saying you saying you don’t mind lgbt only if it’s between two women was absolutely disgusting 3. the EXTENCIVE list of all the women you want the mc to be with while keeping it “romantic and realistic” touch grass expeditiously
Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

🙄

Kile:vile is honestly too nice of a word