Foolish questionsLow iq reactionsWorst is that system allows Mc to control anyone. This destroys the whole plot and treats the world as complete fairy tale

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I read the first 10 chapters and i really liked it. I always had a soft spot for snape. i wish this novel doesn't become like those chinese novels that gets boring after sometimes................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ Yours ever, Oliver Roben

i love this fanfiction because i also don't like the ending Snape get in original and it to sad and this fanfiction let Snape it deserving happy ending .. in original Snape is driven to darkness form his childhood to his bully in school and finally he loses his only friend who he also love to his bully which made him turn to dark lord because he lost everything and had no one to support and guide.. that why I will support and follow the story but i hope author does not drop the story in middle ... it very annoying when you find something to your liking and it end in middle .. so hope author to complete the story and love story very much..❤️.

This is just bad, that’s about it, it’s just bad

the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad

Destroy his own existence , mc choose to cheat, because he is fan. İf you think about it, marauder time memories given by snape during occulememcy traning with harry, but this guy protect his mind with voldemort, how did lose to harry, he probably wanted destroy image of his father name in haary heart. Snape obsest with lily. Creepy. MC basically imperio People because he is creepy fan based on limited information about hp world

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Okay, it shows that you have no experience in this type of plot. Honestly writing these types of stories is more difficult What to write others, I like the idea of ​​changing Snape's destiny You could have created a different simulation, giving it a better destination Even if it is a lie, people will never know, they will think that this is the future Spice up the story