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Review Detail of Inevitron in Becoming Immortal Through Getting Married

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While this is somewhat of a rip-off of another novel, the changes are pretty massive and make it a very different novel. The biggest improvement is that MC treats his wife and concubine like actual human beings instead of like tools or property (even though concubines are technically the property version of a wife, but that's Chinese webnovels for you). I hope it stays that way. The worst change is that the world is unnecessarily dark and edgy, with tons of people dying constantly and people trying to murder MC all the time. The population of the world would run out in a year at the rate people die. The writing and translation of the other novel are far better. It's not like they're terrible here, but the difference is still like night and day. Great vs. average at best. My rating is inflated due to all the 1-bombs from people who never read it. I'd say it actually deserves about a 3.5/5. For the record, I'd give the one it copied a 3/5. If you aren't a webnovel addict who has already read everything, your should probably skip them both and read one of the countless better novels out there.

Becoming Immortal Through Getting Married

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Update: after reading chapters 20+, I have to say I was wrong about the translation. It's pretty awful. Hopefully somebody who knows English better takes over the MTL edit with chapter 41. If not, I doubt I'll read more. Why read a novel that can't even get pronouns right?