Good description of characters, well written novel, good stroyline and cover, keep it up, just more chapters needed and is it necessary for chapter name to be in capital? whatever...everything is great

The story in my opinion is well written and flows in a way that makes it comfortable to read easily. and I liked how the story is progressing. The characters are unique and interesting, and the author seems to know what they are doing. The only complaint I would have would be that one chapter a day is not good for us:) please write 5 or more. We need MORE! Im just kidding don't be hard on yourself, it's all about quality! and you have it on your hands!

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I possess only one word to aptly describe this book - “perfect”.Even if you, like myself, do not hold a fondness for science fiction literature, I implore you to read this book. It is certain to alter your perspective on the genre. The author's ability to meticulously detail every aspect of the story is truly remarkable and makes comprehension effortless.For those who find solace in the pages of science fiction literature, this book is a must-have addition to your collection. The author's ability to paint a picture with words is unparalleled. Every scene is so vividly described that one can almost feel as though they are present in that moment.In conclusion, I unequivocally rate this book a perfect ten out of ten.

The scenes of the earth advancing her technology and the mix of a new species that can do magic leaves a lasting mark. The author takes a new spin on mechas, technology and magic in general. The protagonist himself made some bad decisions but that is what humans do. I would totally recommend this book.

I've only read a few pages, but I'm immediately sucked in! The character exchanges are engaging and don't feel forced. I hope the author keeps putting out more chapters. I only see a few problems, but most authors grow better as the story progresses. Good luck. For me, reading was a very pleasurable activity. One of the best books I've read to date, and it merits recognition and acclaim.

A solid world background with a very interesting and we'll written story. It's very easy to understand and follow up with what was being told in every chapter, even though I'm not that familiar with some terms and places. Overall, I hope this book get more attention from the readers. Keep working on it, Author.

As a good novel said earlier, I hope the author will release more chapters and I wonder when he will pass this training :) It's interesting to watch both the main character and the minor characters and watch the whole picture :)

Awesome novel. I really love sci Fi novels and this one is really good Keep it up author Can't wait for more chaptersss

Its really a educational book for me, I really love reading it already in my library and awaiting more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]