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Hikari_Dvalin
Hikari_DvalinLv41yr
2023-05-22 23:36

can't wait for to see Little lion's character development

Fate: False Sovereignty (Sequel to DML)

Huntsman
4.8
1 Chs

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Niomi
NiomiLv4

this is a sequel of the first story "dead man's lament" so go read it if you want to read this one. only one chapter is out when I'm writing this, but if this is as good as the prequel then this review will be well deserved. (might drop another review when more chapters are released to be more constructive.)

1yr

ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

4 stars because progress in Leo and Gil's relationship is so slow.I wish there was more trust between them.Gil is a Queen, I understand, but Leo shouldn't be chasing after her so much...Honestly, I'd like to know if Gil was really in love with Leo.And good luck with your story.

1yr
F_A_T_E
F_A_T_ELv10

one of the best fate fanfic................. fffhghfhyfdgfhdfgcxnhdhnxhgfrdhtydrxgfrhddxgfnhfynjxdytjynx

1yr
LordEgzekutor
LordEgzekutorLv1

Dope. Magnificent. Wonderful. Amanzig. And im out of fancy english Worda:). Story is perfect. Main character is well written. World is great. Some people dont like system but i dont think its a problem. Mostly you forget about it existing. Its more like Deus ex Machina or plot armor for Leo or just a way to give him cool abilities.

1yr
Tired_Regressor
Tired_RegressorLv3

Finally!! About time for a holy grail war. For the people who are new to this, read the prequel "Dead Man's Lament" if you haven't already. The quality of this work, and it's word count are just as high and lengthy as the prequel. Already read 16 chapters, and I am looking forward to more servant battles and the progressing of the relationships of the mc and the heroines. Also, Saber is now summoned.

1yr
Fickle_as_light
Fickle_as_lightLv4

bro what happened, i already suspected something when the plot was going out of hand and you were loosing control

10mth
DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

Is he gonna get back with ciri and triss anytime soon?

1yr
EvilDarkDemonLord2
EvilDarkDemonLord2Lv4

Cool to see you post on this too [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Mathias08
Mathias08Lv4

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