Interesting plot. I do hope the author tries to incorporate action more into the story. However, the writing style is very nice, and I like how he improves every time. Good job!

Read what was free for a reference point: I like the stories genre and over all theme, it is a blend of elements found in similiar stories on here. Grammar needs work as well. They go from past to presnt to past to future tense throughout the free chapters. World building is almost nonexistent. I assume it was a world similar to our own but if you say a character is from Chicago or NY maybe research how people talk there. What are terms they would use in conversation. You can be creative with world building without using switch POVs like having a news segment terry could watch every so often. If I see an improvement from n the grammar I may come back and read the locked chapters wish you luck

This story has an interesting premise for the MC's leveling process. He has a bit of a stick on his shoulder, not a chip, due to treatment he and others have received. He's still mostly levelheaded, not out for revenge, and trying to fix the underlying issue(s). The fight scenes have been interesting. He's not completely OP yet, but he's at the tipping point. I like the world and character building as there's information, but not too much. There are stats for weapons, but so far, not too often. Oh, and there is no romantic interest up to chapter 47, though there are some potential candidates. Note: There are some grammatical errors, but not too many, the way I've seen in many other webnovels.

This is slowly turningninto a watered Down overgeared, the skills the items get Are uninspired taken from games.. instead of thinking of new and fun effects get things like 10% increase attack and defence. Now the primary focus is apparently guild politics instead of him trying diff weaps for finding unique and usefull skills. How fast the pemise is left behind for a mediocre Dungeon/guild fantasy story.