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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv54mth
2024-12-04 16:10

A nice fanfic, the grammar is good with very few mistakes. The MC is not an idi*t and there aren't major plot holes that I could find. The flow was good and logical. But I only read till chapter 14 and dropped it cuz I found myself a little bored with no plot happening as the MC was only planning and training for the future without actually fighting anyone. Maybe at the later chapters this changes but I'm too impatient to wait.

The Ultimate Saiyan Warrior Reborn

DarkHelixDragoon24
4.3
162 Chs

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Gabriel_Aires
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So why not merge the Super Saiyan 4 and Super Saiyan God transformations ? ............................................................................................

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