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SSpextrillex
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2023-06-25 06:03

Almost everything is great, personally the pacing is a little fast but that's probably just me, other then that this story has some serious potential and I look forward to seeing how it progresses.

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Larry_Moore_9883
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yeah honestly, the pacing is the one thing I have trouble with. I don't want to waste time, but on the other hand I want to give characters moments to breathe. just something I have to work on

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