Item: Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light
Rating: 5
Author: Hemlet

HemletLv31yr

2023-07-11 09:00

I've only read five chapters, but I'll leave this review before continuing. I'm often told that I'm easy to impress, but that's not true, it's just when something is good I like to say it. As an avid reader, I'd already like to thank the author for giving birth to this novel. From the outset, the concept is special (I don't want to spoil anything, but the synopsis says it all). The mix of points of view may seem rather confusing, but the author manages not to lose the reader. As for the universe, I'm still checking it out, but given how well the author describes things, I have nothing to worry about. The characters are rather likeable, I haven't really made friends with any of them yet, but they really do seem "human", which isn't easy to do. Grammar-wise, I'm not an English whiz, but for me it's impeccable. It's with great pleasure that I'm going to follow the adventure of this story. Well, I'll leave you to it. I still have chapters to read 😂👍

Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

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HambinoRanxAuthor

Thank you for this review, I forgot to get around to it but reading this really made me smile with joy. Thank you again and I hope to keep that same energy from you with new chapters.

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