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rizzlord
rizzlordAuthor11mthrizzlord

Hey everyone! As the author of this web novel, I wanted to reach out and ask for your help. Since this is my first time writing, there might be some mistakes in the chapters. If you come across any errors, please leave your feedback in the comments or reviews. I appreciate every comment and review, and I promise to take them into consideration and make necessary fixes. Also, feel free to leave any questions and I will answer them all. Your support and feedback mean a lot to me. Thank you for being a part of this journey!

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System at One End and Harem at the Other End

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KacbRe
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Bruh it's the same as NTR

rizzlord:Once the girl goes into a relationship with someone else, David will no longer be able to use the Harem list, and his relationship will end with her.
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv13Romance_guy

How many in the harem

Hiroton
HirotonLv13Hiroton

my question is about the polyamory. in the description it says no Yuri or ntr but it also has polyamory, not polygamy. as far as I know, polyamory basically means an open relationship where both partners can have multiple partners at the same time. or am I wrong? because if I'm not wouldn't it defeat the purpose of the other tags?

DaoistsVYVaM
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author is any of the girls gonna sleep with any other male apart from him because Polyamory is an open relationship on both sides and it's basically NTR so if if any of the girls he actually has a relationship with sleeps with any other male then I'm gonna have to drop I'm not interested in NTR so I just want to know

rizzlord
rizzlordAuthorrizzlord

I am writing a harem story in a modern setting, while also bending the traditional rule of Harem. The relationships portrayed in the story are consensual and open, with the girls being chosen by a system based on their relationship status if only they are single. Once a girl enters a committed relationship with someone else, she will no longer be part of the harem.

DaoistsVYVaM:author is any of the girls gonna sleep with any other male apart from him because Polyamory is an open relationship on both sides and it's basically NTR so if if any of the girls he actually has a relationship with sleeps with any other male then I'm gonna have to drop I'm not interested in NTR so I just want to know
rizzlord
rizzlordAuthorrizzlord

I am writing a harem story in a modern setting, while also bending the traditional rule of Harem. The relationships portrayed in the story are consensual and open, with the girls being chosen by a system based on their relationship status if only they are single. Once a girl enters a committed relationship with someone else, she will no longer be part of the harem.

Hiroton:my question is about the polyamory. in the description it says no Yuri or ntr but it also has polyamory, not polygamy. as far as I know, polyamory basically means an open relationship where both partners can have multiple partners at the same time. or am I wrong? because if I'm not wouldn't it defeat the purpose of the other tags?
DaoistsVYVaM
DaoistsVYVaMLv15DaoistsVYVaM

I'm more getting at are any of the girls he sleeps with gonna sleep with any other guy while seeing him or are they gonna break it off first and or any girls gonna be fully committed to and not sleep with anyone else

rizzlord:I am writing a harem story in a modern setting, while also bending the traditional rule of Harem. The relationships portrayed in the story are consensual and open, with the girls being chosen by a system based on their relationship status if only they are single. Once a girl enters a committed relationship with someone else, she will no longer be part of the harem.
rizzlord
rizzlordAuthorrizzlord

Once the girl goes into a relationship with someone else, David will no longer be able to use the Harem list, and his relationship will end with her.

DaoistsVYVaM:I'm more getting at are any of the girls he sleeps with gonna sleep with any other guy while seeing him or are they gonna break it off first and or any girls gonna be fully committed to and not sleep with anyone else
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

You should state that clear in a synopsis. no way im reading that. Im to possessive for others to eff mcs harem. That feels like ntr when you talk about it. Good luck it settings like that. But I guess you know how it will end when you want to sell it for harem readers. What a let down...

rizzlord:I am writing a harem story in a modern setting, while also bending the traditional rule of Harem. The relationships portrayed in the story are consensual and open, with the girls being chosen by a system based on their relationship status if only they are single. Once a girl enters a committed relationship with someone else, she will no longer be part of the harem.
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4JRCaste

please tell me you have no interest on letting go of a harem member in this novel?

rizzlord:Once the girl goes into a relationship with someone else, David will no longer be able to use the Harem list, and his relationship will end with her.
Lv_TuBe
Lv_TuBeLv3Lv_TuBe

It hurts only for the first time. 😉😜

GalaxyNekoGoddess
GalaxyNekoGoddessLv13GalaxyNekoGoddess

All the people here who think polyamory is NTR needs to go educate themselves properly because one of them is obviously cheating and betrayal in many forms while the other is an agreed upon relationship that includes multiple people.Closed poly relationship = they don't get with anyone but the people in that relationship, no one else. Open poly relationship = it's in the name, this relationship means they can be with others besides the main relationship they are in and it should be consensual.Polygyny = man with multiple women.Polyandry = woman with multiple menPolygamy = A marriage with multiple people, but traditionally it usually applied to the men.Polyamory = Being in a loving consensual relationship with multiple people ( this term is not limited to just any gender).

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

still disgusting and that dont change anything

GalaxyNekoGoddess:All the people here who think polyamory is NTR needs to go educate themselves properly because one of them is obviously cheating and betrayal in many forms while the other is an agreed upon relationship that includes multiple people.Closed poly relationship = they don't get with anyone but the people in that relationship, no one else. Open poly relationship = it's in the name, this relationship means they can be with others besides the main relationship they are in and it should be consensual.Polygyny = man with multiple women.Polyandry = woman with multiple menPolygamy = A marriage with multiple people, but traditionally it usually applied to the men.Polyamory = Being in a loving consensual relationship with multiple people ( this term is not limited to just any gender).
GalaxyNekoGoddess
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If the author can't convince you nor will reading a definition will, I wish you luck in finding something more to your very specific taste .

Daoist_Culture:still disgusting and that dont change anything
GalaxyNekoGoddess
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There are multiple different polyamory relationship styles e.g the V type where the other people in the relationship only romantically together with one (Mc) but they don't interact in that way with the others in the relationship except maybe being just friends.

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

a simple, hey mc girls wont eff other men and turn him into a cuck, would be fine for me to read it.

GalaxyNekoGoddess:If the author can't convince you nor will reading a definition will, I wish you luck in finding something more to your very specific taste .