Review Detail of EmpathicWan in You ≠ Me

This is a weird story. Each chapter is really well written and deeply engaging... If read separately. If you try to read the chapters together or, even worse, in the order they're written, the story becomes a jumbled mess with no clear narrative or timeline. Time-skips, world hopping, reincarnation, past lives... Every single chapter throws some new "twist". There's something here, a diamond in the rough actually, but it's too disjointed to be a decent story as of right now. I wanted to like this, but as it is, I can't bring myself to.