Not cliché like majority of the novels in webnovel. Still room for development as its author’s first book

I'm just going to be honest when I'm rating this novel and I hope author-San will not be mad because I made a promise to him/her that I will rate or review this novel when I reach at chapter (100) and I will fulfilled that promise right now [1] - writing quality] I'm going to say this the writing quality is good but there is still some grammars that needs to be fixed but over all the writing quality is good [2] - story development] all I can say for the story development is its good its not too long and drawn out and its not too fast that you can't understand I'm currently on (104) and it's good so far [3] - the character design] - is very good all I'm going to say is the Mc is not like all the typical cultivation Mc's but you can still see some similarities but none of them are big that you can notice [4] - updating stability] - I can't say too much about this one but I'll give a very good the author keeps up with his updates [5] - world background] - okay I will say this for the world background it has a very good potential but at the same time we did not get enough of it] I don't know why people are not reading this novel I guess they like the traditional trashy cultivation novels where the Mc's beats up young masters randomly, find beautiful women bathing at the Riverside and 'accidentally' falling inside the river, having old monsters inside a ring to help them, a system that they reborn with, a very extremely powerful Dad that can kill anyone but can't help his son because he is restricted by heaven those types of Bs, but unlike this novel I promise this novel will give you a refreshing read I hope this review helps author-San thank you and good bye 👋🏽

It was my first review, so there may be some mistake. Plot- The story was unique and it showed me a different side of cultivation genre. I never a stroy without cliche, but in this book every chapter has something that connects the future chaps. The storyline cannot be predicted and the author has put so much effort into it. About MC- Not a perfect being with 10,0000... IQ. He is cunning, manipulative and decisive and the most important thing is he is not a skirt chasing guy. The female lead wasn't introduced till now, but I'm waiting for that. World building - Well, there isn't much information about the world till now, so there is nothing much to say. Overall- Everything is good and this book has a chance to become top in the list. The author puts cliffhanger on every important chapter and it annoys me a lot, but it is good and heart felt five star from me.

Really good, i love it you can read it without hesitation.

interesting novel influenced by both jftd and fated villian. you got good test

Good one. I'll be waiting for new chapters, author.

good, great, best, brilliant novel ever 👏

The grammar is really good the flow of the story is also natural and it didn't seem too pushy when introducing characters, overall a good novel[img=recommend]

Absolutely amazing piece of writing. I enjoy how the mc isn't stupid considering he has reincarnated. the healthy relationship with the parents is also good to not make him seem like a emotionless demon without gratitude.