Honestly, this is a good story, but when it comes to womens or Harem or something like that, I feel that the plot becomes brain dead.. Like most other Harem fanfic. A little advice for you writers, if you are new at writing thing, don't rush into making harem stories. Because to be honest, any new writer who wrote a Harem story would definitely make it bad which in the end tarnishes the Harem's image among readers.
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