This is pretty good no spelling mistakes, a class I haven't seen explored by a gamer yet. (I hope that if he gets a subclass he gets another unique class as it was quite refreshing)

........................Excellent grammar, the mc starts out weak but not too weak, and he is not overpowered. He grinds while slowly but surely becoming powerful, I like that although the mc has a certain opinion of Rias, he was civil enough with her which was a good idea, I thought he would start bashing her like in most fanfics. IDK why most people tend to forget her background when they unnecessarily antagonise her, I also like the fact that although the mc wants a harem, he knows how to take things slow and earn affection without simping over women. There many other stuff that I loved about this novel which I won't list but overall it is worth a try despite the clichè gamer in DXD trope, I guarantee that you will love it. ..............................................................

Very frustrating especially the first few chapters. The MC complains about literally everything and he panics about literally nothing. He is a hypocrite which is not bad per se~ he ends up killing Issei and taking his sacred gear cause if your gamer you should right? Anyways, it's a good fic just not for me.

The start was so good, except MC was overly paranoid, and I liked the concept, but it became like those fic were oc kills Issei and gets boosted gear or whatever it is BRUH~ Well I dropped it because I know how it will go. Whatever hope someone else will write a good story like this without killing Issei for the gear because if you are not a gay and not fan of NTR( yes, a male seeing your lover naked through youre yes I consider that NTR) than you will not like a male inside your head. What is the point of reincarnation if someone knows.

honestly, this is a great fic, from the writing quality to the concept of the story and all that, everything about this is great, the only thing that might take away from this story is how often the mc complains and his tendency to sometimes make less than intelligent decisions, but otherwise great fic.

Honestly, this is a good story, but when it comes to womens or Harem or something like that, I feel that the plot becomes brain dead.. Like most other Harem fanfic. A little advice for you writers, if you are new at writing thing, don't rush into making harem stories. Because to be honest, any new writer who wrote a Harem story would definitely make it bad which in the end tarnishes the Harem's image among readers.

this is a pretty good book but it really anoyed me that the writer made the mc a sorcerer yet he has nothing related to them at all except the cursed sura that's it he uses non of the effects or reasons sorcery is interesting he should just be a mage

It's great overall the mc is paranoid, but most thing i dislike is how he's a sorcerer from jjk yet none of his abilities match it all, like bro should just be a mage

too much grind. Why is there "DxD" at all if instead of a plot, 70-80% of it is just clearing dungeons? And the world of "DxD" is used only for communicating with girls.