Review Detail of Tahes in Dad, Please Try a Little Harder

Its a nice twist to the system genre, which actually benefits story building and character building. Characters and supporting case don't become 1 dimensional, they have life to them, and help drive the story forward. This is obviously more Slice of Life, which for me is a selling point with so much junk face slapping novels that repeat the same plot 1000x times, this story gives some feel good plot beats and the story progresses. Grammar needs some better edits, not hard to auto spell check some of these things.