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GhostoftheNorth
GhostoftheNorthLv121yr
2023-06-28 23:21

Very great novel but the Author spoilt it. It had potential

Reborn With an AI

XRavenX
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41 Chs

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Haru_Sakura19923
Haru_Sakura19923Lv1

the synopsis in meant to reveal just enough to hook people into reading. it clearly worked in your case.

1yr
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XRavenX
XRavenXAuthor

Alala, Author here! It’s been a couple of chapters so I shall put this here. Raven, the key figure, and Mia, the female protagonist, are the central figures of this story. I contemplate what the consequence of introducing an advanced AI into the present day could be and how it could shape one's future. This story will mainly follow Raven’s journey of exploring the AI “Vanessa.” With so many options at hand, what would be the best choice for the most optimal outcome? There is a romance between Raven and Mia, and that’s it. No harem, no NTR, no nothing. Any question, ask below and I’ll answer them with 100% of my abilities.

1yr

multiverses_sage
multiverses_sageLv4

so far it's the best slice of life novel

1yr
Cibeu
CibeuLv12

Love the story. BIt biased as I love these types of stories. Grammar issues: there are none I could find. Story: could be slow at some times, but I’ve noticed that’s during the romance chapters so I wont hate on that. Character: not too much to say as it’s only 8 chapters so far, but he feels unique and has his own personality compared to others Like I said; love the story

1yr
Naayil
NaayilLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Celestial_Kaiser
Celestial_KaiserLv4

It's okay-ish. The fact that MC has advanced AI has almost limitless possiblities but the author is taking a more of a 'slice-of-life' approach which really burns away a lot of potential. I mean, just the fact he could learn anything within a few minutes/hours is alone enough to make him OP in ordinary world. It could have been better if author had introduced the FL in later chaps.

1yr
Lokordome
LokordomeLv12

This is a well-written story and definitely better than the standard you usually see on Webnovel. The romance is good even if parts require some suspension of disbelief. The slice of life is really nice and I am super thankful for the intelligent MC we've been blessed with. He trusts his golden finger and uses it in a lot of the ways I could personally think of using such an ability. Overall, this a good story. Keep it up Author! TFTC

1yr
Monosir
MonosirLv2

Pretty good… I have one problem which is the spacing on the paragraphs, but you can easily fix that…

1yr
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