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The_Sweet_Sparrow
The_Sweet_SparrowLv141yr
2023-06-18 10:19

AngelLily has done it again and written a fascinating and beautiful story. There are excellently developed characters and a marvelous plot that leaves you speculating about what will happen next. FL has a subtle soft side; I think she will develop into a strong character. In contrast, the ML is possessive and seems uncompromising. I am curious to see where his story will lead us. The writing is astoundingly eloquent. The grammar is superb, along with the tone and flow. As of now, I think it deserves a five-star rating. 

A Game Of Chess With A Vampire

AngelLily
4.8
415 Chs

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I am at the latest chapter “13” and it’s time to give a well deserving review. This is a very good book in all honesty. The story line is just amazing, unpredictable and so good. I was hooked by the first few chapters. Oh my god! It’s different from the novels I have read here. The title alone proves that. Grammar: 10/10. I have not glimpsed any grammar mistakes. Shows that author proof read these chapters more than properly. Good job on that author! Character Development: From these thirteen chapter, i can assure you that the female lead is very sensible, knowledgeable, likable and very fit for the male lead regardless of her being a human. Not in strength, but mindset and intelligence. The Male lead? He is a very unique character. I guarantee you that he is not at all abusive. As a matter of fact, you guys will love him. I already do, myself. By unique, I mean that he behaves differently, you will get to find out when you pick up the book. Story development: So far loving it. It’s looking very good. World background: Urgh😩, its detailed, I love it! Including the characters. Their descriptions are chef kiss👌 10/10 All in all, this is authors best book in my opinion. It’s clear, she took her time with it because evrything is near perfection! More chapters please, author. Maybe a mass release? I 100% recommend. Give it a chance and thank me later😩👌 Also this books gives Italian Mafian movie vibes. Spoiler, it’s mafia as well.

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Michelle_Reece
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I always look forward to anything AngelLily writes,but I'm very excited about this book.I have read 16 chapters and was hooked from the first chapter.I must say this is one of her best books,it hooks you in immediately and keeps you on your toes.So excited to see where this strory goes.Strong female lead as always and the male lead is a unique character.The relationship between the leads are very compelling.The grammar is perfect,I can see the growth in her writing.I can see sleepless nights and obsessing over reading this book.And praying for a lot of mass release.I would highly recommend reading this book and all of her other books.

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Melynn
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When I started to read this I can't put it down and waiting for the next update .AngelLily is a great author, mostly the FL at first they're weak, but actually they're smart, funny and strong. And a reliable one. And the ML are filthy-rich, handsome and powerful. That attracts me more..😘😊🤗

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BaeVida
BaeVidaLv14

First reviewer, this should count... Author has properly improved compared to her last work. The descriptions are on point, the scene is fleshed out well. The pace of the story is going well. Nothing boring. The male is such a cutely powerful wealthy... (fill in the rest yourself) kinda already am loving 2nd ml hehhe Though just a few chaps in and I can see a good vibe for the book. Even d FL is shocked by it lol Author did a good one researching, mayb hehhe. I love the slight use of another language in it. Only problem this far which can be brushed aside, slight mix of tense which was very scanty and doesn't for once take away from the thrill. So yeah, it deserves all 5 start. I am proud for authors's growth. Synopsis check... it's cool. The title alone is really nice. A Game of Chess... oh lala... Writing quality muah. 😉 All in all, great book. Keep it up!

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Valoel
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This story makes the readers captivated by Angel lily's spell. I spend all the FPs i havse on this book. IT IS AMAZING. Well done.

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wonderful gripping read putting you in a trance and curiosity to know more

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Elona_Elen
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Hm, I'm not exactly reading for the romance because I've had my fill with romance. I'm simply reading and following for the incredible plot 10/10 plot so far. Ah, yes, for insight, this book is not a full on romance. Half of plot, half of romance.

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Chichi_Chamba
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Intelligent, smart Male lead. Cautious, female lead who doesn't make rash decisions. In 107 chapters and so far, I love her. A few mistakes here and there, but shows she's still a human after all. Great book so far. Recommended

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The quality of this book is completely worth the coins. Beautiful fine writing and grammar. Well-defined and well-structured sentences! I give you a 10/10 author. Great storyline that keeps both romance and plot balanced. I'm not into a full-on romance, so this book is just right for me.This is highly recommended for anyone looking for good book recommendations. You won't be disappointed. This book will most certainly keep me here in Webnovel for a while

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