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Mattard58
Mattard58Lv41yr
2024-01-06 22:14

Very good novel (writing, uptade and story) and interesting concept, still don't understand why it isn't more popular.

Dungeon Raider System

NanaiSensei
4.2
940 Chs

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NanaiSensei
NanaiSenseiAuthor

Hey! Thank you for leaving a reply. I can't say for sure why this novel isn't more popular, but you may have already guessed english is not my native language. I started writing my first novel last year as a means to polish my english and that's all my experience in writing novels. I'm just glad to be able to get DRS out in the world and have nice people like you, saying the writing quality is good. It makes it all worth it!

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Mattard58
Mattard58Lv4

ahaha maybe it's also because english isn't my native language that i don't "see" the issues with your writing.thanks for the reply, good luck

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