As of right now the story is too fast with slow update. Amount of dialogues makes it look like a script than a written story. Character is very bland. This fan-fiction is of modern family, but the character intersection feels off. Mc's relationship status changed way too fast, no added description. Needlessly created drama. Actions taking by MC is confusing with no apparent explanation. Time-skips and jumps are frequent making it hard to understand whats going on in the story.
I_am_Your_mommy
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