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Oxebatron
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2023-05-14 19:41

So is the story starting in season 3 of canon since the male oc is 18 and haley's twin?

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I_am_Your_mommy
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Season 4 when Hailey goes to college.

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Iceyunderground
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Ok.... so, hmm, I don't normally do reviews, but here's my take on this novel. I've currently read up to ch. 10 or 11, enough to finish with THAT drama. By the way, the very first chapter is nothing but word filler gibberish, an automatic degrade on all review points by 1 each. Writing Quality: (4/5) but due to first chapter it's 3/5 - Not bad but there are frequent parts that make me have to stop and re-read a bit. Stability of Updates: (1/5) but due to first chapter it's 1/5 - the last update was at least 1mth ago, so you tell me if that deserves anything higher than a 1. Story Development: (4/5) but due to first chapter it's 3/5 - The MC is supposed to be a twin brother of Haley, but whenever he is in a scene with the rest of the family, he's just sorta there. He doesn't change anything, Modern Family situations/episodes wise, he just 'exists'. Though this does slightly change in the last chapter but it's almost as if the family is just sorta there for HIS part of the story now. Read it if you want, you'll get what I mean. The rest of the story though is where the novel really shines, as short as it is. Things kinda just happen from one point to the next, but it does make sense in the same way that real life also has 'stuff' happen from one moment to the next. Character Design: (4/5) but due to first chapter it's 3/5 - MC seems likable but also really out of place. I'm still wondering how he knows so little about the stuff he does when he's supposed to be siblings with Haley. World Background: (3/5) but due to first chapter it's 2/5 - The world interactions when the novel follows one of the Modern Family episodes is good, though that's to be expected when the novel follows the episodes almost 100%. Not good. The interactions when the novel follows only the MC ranges from, "...ok then" to "Just take a breath and keep reading. The chapter will end soon." Overview: Is this novel worth spending your time on? Sincerely? I don't think it is, just skip this one and find something else. Though I will admit that since it's short it doesn't take much time to read all there is to it for now, so that's a plus to it. I actually do enjoy that when THE DRAMA starts, it just comes out of nowhere (kinda but not really, there was a sign) and hits hard, like real life does too sometimes. MC's decision at THE DRAMA though ..... .... ... ~yeeeeeah~ I decided to just finish the chapter and then Nope my way out of this novel. As a last note, the author has (had? I mean, it's been a month since the last update so maybe the novels been abandoned?) decided to make the novel a harem or polyarmory? polyarmorous? polygamy? I'm not remembering the word they used but it was poly-something.

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