Review Detail of XxTruck_KunxX in GOT: The Rise Of House Blackfyre
Review detail
Imma be honest, I don’t know how I feel about this. There are spelling mistakes but not enough to ruin the story. My main issue is with the direction this story is going, it’s a great idea but a two year old should not be killing adult wolves and doing blood magic rituals. On top of that the whole appearance thing because of blood magic kinda leaves a bad taste in my mouth because it make no sense, his mom was apparently a blood mate and yet she still has white hair and purple eyes???? This story has a lot of good ideas but just keeps falling short when the author adds bad ideas that overshadow the good ones. And finally the MC, I can already tell he won’t just be a villain but a murder hobo, I can see where it is going and I don’t like it. Anyway not for me but if anyone else wants to read it go ahead.
GOT: The Rise Of House Blackfyre
Dextrious
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I’m sorry my writing wasn’t up to ur standard. I’m still new to writing and this is my first fic that I’m actually putting an effort into too so I’m still lacking in a lot of area. Appreciate ur honest review, I’ll also try better to make things more realistic while keeping the fantasy aspects of it and once again thank u for ur constrictive criticism.
Maybe he can revive old valyria because he likes having slaves to use in magic and they had that down would be good as would make him a lot of enemies to fight he could make a early Rome
Dextrious:I’m sorry my writing wasn’t up to ur standard. I’m still new to writing and this is my first fic that I’m actually putting an effort into too so I’m still lacking in a lot of area. Appreciate ur honest review, I’ll also try better to make things more realistic while keeping the fantasy aspects of it and once again thank u for ur constrictive criticism.