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TheBodyguard
TheBodyguardLv11yr
2023-08-22 03:36

What should i say.I was enjoying the story at start.But the plot became extremely stupid.Because of lot plot twist, I was expecting that his(MC) father would know his(MC's) plan about defeating him.But what happened was more stupid thing. if the father so smart to control Mc, he himself should have conquered the world, rather than playing with 5yrs old child.Now all I have to hear is after conquering the world, his father's another letter would arrive and with message saying "I believed in you son,I made myself villian so you can become stronger". And also more importantly if his(father's) personality was as author said, his father should have fked MC girls infront of him(MC), like the father said to the MC that he will fk them in front of him, when the girls grow up.Not doing that means contradicting to his(father) personality.More importantly what's the point to read if it left extremely sour taste, because he can't take his revenge on his father. even if he conquers the world he will just be pawn of his father, like his father wanted because he would be doing what just his father wants i.e.., conquer the world.And author said no netorare but MC's mother rped by his father. Mc loved his mother sexually.

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