Review Detail of AI380 in Frozen awakening

To be honest, the concept of the story and the story plot is good, and I really like it. But because I like it, I need to point out some flaws that might affect the performance of this book. First of all, it's the presentation of a paragraph. Mixing in multiple dialogues with narrations can be quite confusing and hard to read for most of the readers, try to avoid that if possible. Secondly, regarding the punctuation, regarding dialogues again, I noticed in some chapters, you didn't include "..." for your dialogue which makes it really hard to read especially when it is a first-person pov. That's all I guess, I hope my comments wouldn't be too harsh for you, your story has great potential if you could fix some flaws in it.