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In my opinion the story has a good pace, but those 3 chapters of Komi's point of view and now these 3 chapters of Shikimori's point of view, are unnecessary, a single chapter for each one was enough, those 6 chapters told us what we already knew, because in those chapters nothing interesting is mentioned, I hope the author with the following heroines doesn't do the same, a single chapter is enough to talk about that we already know.
AFFECTION SYSTEM: CONQUER THE HEROINES
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Author here... Thanks for the review. I am grateful that you are liking my novel... And about the POV of the heroines, I think you are somewhat right. But in my opinion, I think these heroine's POVs are necessary... In Komi-san's case, the part where 'she became friends with Shikimori' and in Shikimori-san s case, the part that 'how she started liking the Volleyball as well as the mention of the 'manga'...'... So, please continue reading my novel...🙂🙂 [Spoiler: The MANGA will play a big role in future... ]