Review from a couple dozen chapters in: This is an ambitious and wide-sweeping storyline. However, the writing is rough and feels rushed. More time should have been used in thinking/research. Thus, the biggest problem is that the state of the world and the reactions of the characters in it do not seem logical and realistic enough. They are too simple and the MC convinces and amazes people too easily. As it is, readers need to turn off their brain in almost every chapter to accommodate this unrealistic portrayal of the world.
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