Review Detail of imWold in SSS SKILL: DUPLICATE

I will be honest here. The novel will stop most of the readers at the start from continuing to read it, after a few chapters. The English, writing and grammar is really frustrating. I am trying to read the novel and hoping that the further I read, the better the writing will become, but its just unbearable. It is same mistake all authors make trying to please the readers by making excuses that it will get better later on. You have to understand that the start of the novel is the most important part of the reading experience, it contains the general idea of the type of the novel the reader is going to expect and important information that is to be known to understand the story. If the start is so frustrating and unbearable, you cannot expect the readers to continue reading your story. It has been 8 months and there is still no edits to the beginning, this shows why your novel is still not so popular and the support received is not that great. This is just my suggestion as a reader as it is the only reason I will mostly not continue reading this novel. I don't know if this helps you or it will be ignored, but thats all I can say. Also, the update stability, in my opinion is slow as compared to other popular and thriving novels on webnovel, so if you are looking to succeed as a writer and not a part-timer, I suggest you buck-up and pick up the pace.