Review Detail of MeowMeowGourmet in The Rakshas Apocalypse

This is the first time I've come across a story with a premise as this one and I'm liking it. Syntax and grammar can be improved but other than that, the story is great. So far, it has just the right amount of action and anticipation going on that makes one read on. I kinda want to see it darker tho, with more action and gore😭