Review Detail of MidsummerDaybreak in The Rakshas Apocalypse
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Well then. To tell the truth, this story was surprisingly good. It has a potential from its premise. The pace is not too fast either. Now the lacking part is the execution of the idea. If I can say, the narrative is lacking in description and too casual. You need to put a difference between the narratives and dialogues to make the story more beautiful. As for the characters, well, honestly, I can't find anything to make them stand out and they also seem to lack emotions. Perhaps you can develop the characters more to make them more charming and interesting. Wishing you a pleasant journey :)
The Rakshas Apocalypse
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Maybe you can take references from other novels. Observe how each author portray different characters. You can also observe their writing styles. Don't be too focused on the world building and story plot. The interactions between the characters and their emotional input in different situations are also important to make the readers engrossed in the story. Break a leg!
MidsummerDaybreak:Maybe you can take references from other novels. Observe how each author portray different characters. You can also observe their writing styles. Don't be too focused on the world building and story plot. The interactions between the characters and their emotional input in different situations are also important to make the readers engrossed in the story. Break a leg!