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PEARL_WANGLv111yr
2023-06-05 16:47

The writing quality is good at first, more description needed, however, the writer has been writing to the point things, which is suitable for this time of novel. more chapters needed.

OGI: The Hunt for Level Three

THE_GOAT_HIMSELF
4.6
182 Chs

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AYESHA_FAHIM
AYESHA_FAHIMLv1

I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more. May this book's popularity rise in the future! The conversation needs work if you want people to be more interested in the story's potential, thrilling action, and enigmatic character. I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more. May this book's popularity rise in the future!

1yr

redlady
redladyLv1

This is the second time a review this book.What I like is that the ML is relatable and the overall action is keeping you on your toes .Great suspense !

1yr
ATOMIC_MOON
ATOMIC_MOONLv3

A very good story with a engaging plot and a good pace. the situation of kage in academy I give you that excellent job but the descriptions can be improved other then that . it's a very good story

1yr
Sereinchoo
SereinchooLv2

Interesting premise - wondering the direction that the story will go. I really enjoy reading the story. Great job author, just take care on some of your grammar mistakes.

1yr
yunojiii
yunojiiiLv11

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Main_Island
Main_IslandLv3

I'm thoroughly enjoying this book and hope it keeps updating and being just as enjoyable in the future. it was a bit rough at the start but as the story has continued you can see where the author is improving and slowing getting better at writing

1yr
Perfect_praize
Perfect_praizeLv3

Wow, this is a great book. I love martial arts

1yr
SYED_ASAD
SYED_ASADLv2

I think that the prologue part is totally not needed right now. The way I see it, it can be very eye opening if the prologue part can be used further in the story. otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.

1yr
Grandmasters
GrandmastersLv3

Wow an amazing work! I loved it a lot. With more updates, this sure will be a blast! Keep updating and you will surely find success. Good luck!

1yr
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