Review Detail of Kuro_Saga in Yu-Gi-Oh: Fate Of Time

Item: Yu-Gi-Oh: Fate Of Time
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

Kuro_SagaLv410mthKuro_Saga

this good but i hope you dont story to much and relationship with ishuzu happen to fast no development happen so i hope in next story or next chapter you can fix that and your duel writing is good but i think you can improve more. sorry may english bad i hope you can read this

Yu-Gi-Oh: Fate Of Time

Glace

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Kuro_SagaLv4Kuro_Saga

thank you, and sorry for inconvenient

Glace:Lol i’m not trying to rush the story That’s for sure, i Take my Time. Also yes, i know i Can write better But i sick at writing it’s even explain in the description But We will see with time.

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Kuro_SagaLv4Kuro_Saga

im sorry what i mean about top word is, don't push story to fast

10mth

GlaceAuthorGlace

Lol i’m not trying to rush the story That’s for sure, i Take my Time. Also yes, i know i Can write better But i sick at writing it’s even explain in the description But We will see with time.

10mth