love it man but if you have time and want to write something like this again please consider writing about superman though I love the character of superman he is still a little too good
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LIKEI know but don't forget kryptonite and other characters like Darkseid and the guy is a goody two shoe he still hasn't killed anyone...please don't take it a wrong way it's just a suggestion I still enjoy the novel you are writing
God_Doom:Superman is too op. Writing about Superman will just be slice of life and no actual plot since any fight would end in minutes. I mean all someone reborn as Superman has to do is search for a quasar or blue sun and voila, instant multiversal level power.