Review Detail of Melitia_Snek in OMNITRIX (DC)

Item: OMNITRIX (DC)
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

Melitia_SnekLv57mthMelitia_Snek

Good writing quality but terrible story development and character design. The plot is forced and the MC is stupid. He uses the Omnitrix only to fight, not improve his life. He could easily make money with some of the aliens, yet doesn't.

OMNITRIX (DC)

Baph0met

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the_arbiterLv3the_arbiter

Try, "Dial" (Omnitrix in Marvel), it already has even a sequel Dial: Resumed, It's good and doesn't fall for the same trope of being ben 10 just in another Universe

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Melitia_SnekLv5Melitia_Snek

Thanks for the recommendation. I will try it.

the_arbiter:Try, "Dial" (Omnitrix in Marvel), it already has even a sequel Dial: Resumed, It's good and doesn't fall for the same trope of being ben 10 just in another Universe

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