Real review - Spoiler The novel is as good as it’s romance…. Romance - Guy orders pizza, Hot pizza girl delivers food late at night, MC thinks it’s normal, he has had many top girls chase him in the past, Author never reveals what the MC looks like, MC is total chick magnet….. She sees he has a ps5, Asks the MC if she can play for 30mins Plays for 2 hours, Now she has to go home….. 10mins later She missed her bus, She comes back to MC’s house, while MC is having a mad bat in the shower She breaks in the apartment “because it’s alright as long as the door is unlocked” Sees the MC in the shower and says I bought bbq and drinks. Let me stay over…….. MC is not phased, let’s her stay even tho he doesn’t know her He says nothing is going to happen,… Next day they wake up together having done the deed She says she was a virgin MC says back im a virgin as well This is the same MC that before this said he was chased by beautiful women and he was some player… Now they are boyfriend girlfriend The story is as good as the romance. You might think it sounds good, that’s because I’m the author of this comment. Sounds much plainer in the novel. No discredit to the author, but romance is a good place to improve on. Good luck, good readings!
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