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2023-05-11 01:15

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Failed Villain (BL)

Chase_Xavier_123
4.8
20 Chs

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Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Author

Don't want to come off as rude as I know you are a new author but with how webnovels rep is plz refrain from leaving reviews with emojis. Or just flat words in the future. As not only does it makes them seem disingenuous (I am being hypocritical here.) but also repels readers. Cause making review swaps doesn't have just the intention of getting a 5-star on the novel. As Webnovel already has a trash 5-star novel but gets honest reviews, maybe criticism from fellow authors. Sorry if I came off as rude it wasn't my intention. Sorry.

1yr
Main_Island
Main_IslandLv3

yeah i know, even as a reader this repels me but the book can't have a rating until it has 14 reviews mininum, it repels readers indeed but i will delete the nonsense reviews once i get 14 decent reviews

Chase_Xavier_123:Don't want to come off as rude as I know you are a new author but with how webnovels rep is plz refrain from leaving reviews with emojis. Or just flat words in the future. As not only does it makes them seem disingenuous (I am being hypocritical here.) but also repels readers. Cause making review swaps doesn't have just the intention of getting a 5-star on the novel. As Webnovel already has a trash 5-star novel but gets honest reviews, maybe criticism from fellow authors. Sorry if I came off as rude it wasn't my intention. Sorry.
1yr
Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Author

Well I get that getting a star rating might be useful in someway and review swaps purpose is to get that rating up to certain point. But rather than just mindlessly giving a five star review or review with nothing but emojis is wrong too. I mean the least you could have done is to read the synopsis and write something off of that. I am not trying to bash you or anything. (but sorry by review swaping I was looking for opinions). I guess forget.

Main_Island:yeah i know, even as a reader this repels me but the book can't have a rating until it has 14 reviews mininum, it repels readers indeed but i will delete the nonsense reviews once i get 14 decent reviews
1yr
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Kevin_007
Kevin_007Lv3

Okay, let's talk about it ... I'm a slow reader but what I read is a book with the system and tbh... it's quite good. The writing is smooth and Easy to understand without any effort ..(great) no typical information and blood and unnecessary butchery (good). The opening scene of Tea is quite smooth as the whole writing .....it is worth reading. At least I can say for myself. I love how he every himself and always system reminds him...its one of the system books I could understand ...Although I know nothing about them... And from character to world-building, emotions and dialogue everything superfine for me...and I love System 420 more than Li Jie...

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Crying_crying123
Crying_crying123Lv1

The characters are nice especially Jian Tang wanna see Leng Rui being smitten with Li Jie though loved to see the future updates.

1yr
BL_freak378
BL_freak378Lv2

Hello author... I am here to give my idea about this work I read all the chapters so far u have uploaded. Actually this is interesting. I personally love how the story started. Made me feel like wow... The writing style must be what get me hooked up. I usually have a hard time with very heavy words. But here I was very calm amd relaxed. The villian as star of thr show... I love it... I am sorry because I am actually very lazy to comment from para to para. That's why I am here to tell everything as a review.. I would like to recommend you to use a book cover which could make it even more interesting. It will attrack more readers because we still can't stop judging a book by its cover.. Over all I love this work... So here is my response for giving such an interesting work. ❤❤❤❤

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MayaKeiran
MayaKeiranLv13

A villain system novel with a great premise and character design. The world background is surprisingly good and I love Li Jie's character. Author's writing style is so good you will get immersed in the book. Would I recommend this book? An absolute yes from me. Add this to your library and give it a read. It is worth your time and trust me, you will not be disappointed.

1yr
lo_rezi
lo_reziLv3

all 5 stars for this author. this book is surly a good one and I'll recommend it to anyone interested

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Mi_22
Mi_22Lv11

I actually had the fortune of reading the manuscript of this novel beforehand and I absolutely had no idea that it got released... Had a lot of thoughts I wanted to share back then but reserved from making it. This is actually a very fun story with a lot of wit and satirical elements. The characterisation of the lead, was something I always wanted to see in a main character... the laidback 'I don't care' attitude. Loved it. And I wish it is maintained that way throughout the story. Anyways, will keep on reading the novel and try to see whether I can learn something🙂

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ZyRule
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hm... I like the villain system, overall this novel is good! [img=recommend]ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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OnikunStudios
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Idyllic_Scribe
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In case anyone needs a little bit of comedy in their lives, this is a good story for that. It is sarcastis, satirical, and breaks the limits of the imagineation. Of course, in a good way. Very incredible book! I personally love it!

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Flattened_Rice_007
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Love this story completely. The flow is fantabulous, no lousy gaps and only a good novel. It's such a fast read, and now I hungry for its more chapters. Author, I hope you keep updating this wonderful story.

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