Review Detail of OldNispy in Knowledge and Power: Reborn into a society that only values strength.

Item: Knowledge and Power: Reborn into a society that only values strength.
Rating: 4.6

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OldNispyLv31yrOldNispy

Good job in writing and a lot of kudos for the effort to describe, well, everything. I think the characters are some nicely and as 3d as you can. Overall good read

Knowledge and Power: Reborn into a society that only values strength.

Lions_Quill

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Lions_QuillAuthorLions_Quill

Thanks so much for the review. Can I ask if there was anything you thought of to improve it? If you cant pin it down exactly that's fine. Just noticed the 4 stars, and would like to know if I could make it 5 in your opinion.

1yr

OldNispyLv3OldNispy

It's really fine! Just a few point deductions. I can't give the full stars because the paragraphs are a bit long (not recommended for WN) and the first chaps focus too much on the internal, I guess? But this is probably because only a few chapters are out.

Lions_Quill:Thanks so much for the review. Can I ask if there was anything you thought of to improve it? If you cant pin it down exactly that's fine. Just noticed the 4 stars, and would like to know if I could make it 5 in your opinion.

1yr

Lions_QuillAuthorLions_Quill

Ok, thank you.

OldNispy:It's really fine! Just a few point deductions. I can't give the full stars because the paragraphs are a bit long (not recommended for WN) and the first chaps focus too much on the internal, I guess? But this is probably because only a few chapters are out.

1yr