Going to follow the example of all authors and rate my own work as 5 star. If there are any criticisms or areas of improvement, please point it out. Not only that, feel free to treat this comment as a Q&A session. I will respond to any questions as long as they don't ask about something that will be a major spoiler for the story.

you know what, i prefer to put Tbate in the title, if it not for your other novel i will not find this, i read tbate fan fic many times but i never find this which confused to me at first why i feel like there's nobody read this novel. though overall it's good keep going👍

BRO THIS IS A COMPLETE MASTERPIECE BRO!! !! MAN WAITING FOR THE NEW CHAPTERS . . :)

One of the best TBATE fan fics i've read in a while. I would highly recommend this book to anyone with the knowledge pf TBATE as it explores a whole new concept, away from the traditional storyline of TBATE. It introduces new characters, power scales, and concept of core as well as magic in the world of TBATE. I would have given this book a 5 star if not for the lack of a proper ending, but overall, i would highly recommend this book. Thank you author for a wonder read!

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The novel is great, I only have one complaint, the political marriages are too forced, even I got irritated when I read it, but ignoring this small event the novel is amazing and hard to predict, I liked.

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