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Atruesealenjoyer
AtruesealenjoyerLv41yr
2023-08-05 13:31

This definitely has potential the premise is great and another thing is that it has no errors. Although it could use some work for pacing and development some character interactions seem a bit forced and fake. I know how much work people like authors put into this kinda thing, I definitely couldn’t put in the effort.

Butterfly Tamer in the Apocalypse

Karme
4.4
68 Chs

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puding_
puding_Lv11

I love the way u write, hehe, and of course, the protagonist. MUAH, chef kiss, i just love the way u make the mc. He was a fun one and of course we shouldn't forget about the butterfly ♥︎. Overall, u make a great story, and it has a lot of potential. I hope u take care of yourself, I also hope u won't drop the story...since it is a fun one. For the other, i recommended this story if u like butterfly♥︎ (seriously though, the story is good. Give it a try!)

1yr

Azk08
Azk08Lv1

I've Saw your post on the webnovel forum and decided to try your novel. I was so surprised by the writing quality and the unexpected power of the mc that it made me feel like reading more! I can't wait to see the next chapters!!

1yr
Kiligo
KiligoLv1

Coming into this, I really thought it was like every other apocalypse novels, and I was determined to leave with a bad review. But even though there were only four chapters for now, I think I fell in love with the story already. Just the power in itself is unique in its own way and I can't wait to see what you will do with it once the MC will be stronger. PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS!!!

1yr
KingEherious
KingEheriousLv4

While I loved the concept and butterflies here ,it's totally full of plot holes , unnecessary near death experience and forced romance and one dimensional side characters. Maybe I had higher expectations that's why it was this bad for me still it is what it is.

1yr
1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

👍

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_Ness_
_Ness_Lv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
IJUSTWANTTODIE
IJUSTWANTTODIELv1

more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please

1yr
IJUSTWANTTODIE
IJUSTWANTTODIELv1

Thank you for the chapter I hope you post tomorrow to. the fight part was really good i hope this becomes a big novel with hundreds of chapter.

1yr
Luxielle
LuxielleLv4

Absolutely loved the butterfly theme in an apocalypse setting ❤️❤️ Rooting for your success!! and praying for more chapters to come!! God bless author 🙏😊

1yr
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