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Charlotte_Mage
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I must say I'm rather really liking this re write of yours, although it does feel fast pased, but it's still interesting a fun to read, and I quit like the world travel system. as long as it isn't used like every 5 chapters then it's all good, I mean I don't mind if he can go back to the world's he has already been too but remember this is a twilight main, please keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait for more.

Reincarnated into Twilight & The Multiverse

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Enrique_Noriega
Enrique_NoriegaLv1Enrique_Noriega

Esta bien para empezar a desarrollar y puedes corregir poco a poco algunas cosas pero . . . tiene mucho potencial tu historia . . . con calma podrás liberar tu imaginación y creatividad en esta historia que podrías desarrollar hasta 1,000 capítulos como mínimo y poco desarrollo y 3,000 con buen "jugo" en la historia 😉.