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Aim_MASTER
Aim_MASTERLv141yr
2023-05-09 14:46

The mc has a personality disorder, quirkless , has no education, can't really communicate and literally blind in 1 eye. The author is really sadistic but I quite enjoy the fic. Mc little conversation with toga is cute and I like how he do in the entrance exam, showing what kind of hero he want to be.

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Ballad
BalladLv5

Sounds like every moronic Quirkless Hero story I've seen. If you really think that some Quirkless loser can amount to anything in a world ruled by superpowers then that person is delusional.

AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

Batman? Tony Stark? Hakweye? Black Widow? Lex Luthor? Hello? LOL

Ballad:Sounds like every moronic Quirkless Hero story I've seen. If you really think that some Quirkless loser can amount to anything in a world ruled by superpowers then that person is delusional.
Ballad
BalladLv5

Pshhh please don't involve plot armor protected characters.

AgentMonke:Batman? Tony Stark? Hakweye? Black Widow? Lex Luthor? Hello? LOL
AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

o.O All characters are plot protected characters. I'm talking about the comic books, they get beat down but they get back up and save the day, are they not heroes? If you want to talk about movies... Tony Stark built his suit... In a cave! WITH A BOX OF SCRAPS!

Ballad:Pshhh please don't involve plot armor protected characters.
ForgeCoffee
ForgeCoffeeLv14

That building from a box of scraps came from millions of dollars of tinkering with machine for decades. don't say it like he made it with no knowledge. And all these character got money hahah anyway, nice fic

AgentMonke:o.O All characters are plot protected characters. I'm talking about the comic books, they get beat down but they get back up and save the day, are they not heroes? If you want to talk about movies... Tony Stark built his suit... In a cave! WITH A BOX OF SCRAPS!
AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

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ForgeCoffee:That building from a box of scraps came from millions of dollars of tinkering with machine for decades. don't say it like he made it with no knowledge. And all these character got money hahah anyway, nice fic
Aim_MASTER
Aim_MASTERLv14

That's why I thought the phrasing sound familiar. You took it straight out of the movie

AgentMonke:...
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Devilgodking
DevilgodkingLv6

dare devil, punisher, deadshot, etc

7rox
7roxLv4

Literally all the characters you mentioned, were extremely smart in one way or the other. This MC seems easily manipulated. Nice idea btw, a fresh taste to the MHA category. Good luck👍🏻

Knived
KnivedLv10

So is this another one of those edgy anti hero stories?

Aim_MASTER
Aim_MASTERLv14

Anti hero maybe, but definitely not edgy. The mc is nice and too dumb to make plan to be evil but easy to be influenced.

Knived:So is this another one of those edgy anti hero stories?
Lostleg
LostlegLv14

He is kinda like batgirl(Cassandra)

Lostleg
LostlegLv14

RatedOverr
RatedOverrLv2

Is this a harem (if yes how large?), and if you are fine with spoiling, who is the love interest?

AgentMonke:...
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TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv13

Yeah Yandere is cute when they can't harm you.

AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

if you like Harem, im banning you from tainting my book with your disgusting eyes.

RatedOverr:Is this a harem (if yes how large?), and if you are fine with spoiling, who is the love interest?
_NorthStar_
_NorthStar_Lv14

YOU! Join my No-Harem sect... brother... together we shall cleanse web novel of this filth! XD

AgentMonke:if you like Harem, im banning you from tainting my book with your disgusting eyes.
RatedOverr
RatedOverrLv2

I dislike harem (willing to read it if it is a small one a good novel, but still isn't my favourite.) Guess that answers my question though lol, glad to know it isn't one

AgentMonke:if you like Harem, im banning you from tainting my book with your disgusting eyes.
Hunter_Monarch132
Hunter_Monarch132Lv1

well this sect won't last long XD

_NorthStar_:YOU! Join my No-Harem sect... brother... together we shall cleanse web novel of this filth! XD
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Lv1_Water_Bottle
Lv1_Water_BottleLv3

I mean. I know you're having this argument in the heat of the moment but, you can just not read it. Offtopicly enough I didn't like when in Mushoku Tensei the MC went all emo unconfident and suddenly impotent for a dumb misunderstanding and I just stopped reading it.

ForgeCoffee:That building from a box of scraps came from millions of dollars of tinkering with machine for decades. don't say it like he made it with no knowledge. And all these character got money hahah anyway, nice fic
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LiquorSquad
LiquorSquadLv5

Since the author is pinning one star reviews, here's mine. The premise of someone normal training only his body and combat techniques in a world with super powers is fine, many heroes without any kind of super constitutions in the original work can tank hits that would turn any normal human into chunky salsa. Aizawa for example can jump 3 meters in the air, get hit by some guy with hulk tier strenght and NOT become fine red mist on contact and is basically an anime ninja in all but name. Add to that the absurd science fiction technology of the show, there really isn't much of a reason why some "normal" guy in that world without a quirk couldn't become a hero if he puts the effort in it besides the "It would make other heroes look bad in comparison" reason, but that's besides the point, the point is that the premise could totally work. The reason it doesn't work is becouse the MC is both a nice optimistic guy that's very likeable and also rabid dog hellbent on destruction, and the longer it goes the less excuses you can make for the former because of the latter. There's absolutely no reason why he, a person that probably has a body count in the 4 digits by now, should be outside a psychiatric ward, or just jail, specially in a world where everyone is obsessed with morality, law and justice. The reason he gets away with it for most of the novel is becouse... they like him better? At some point it starts to read like excuses you would hear from “Pit Mommies” after their pitbulls start mauling mailmen and eating babies, here's a dramatic interpretation of the first 100 chapters Some Hero: "BULLET, STOP EATING THOSE VILLAINS RIGHT THIS INSTANT!" Bullet: *Sad Puppy Eyes* Some Hero: "Awww, i can't get mad at you, but don't do it again, okay?" Bullet: * Does it again for another 100 chapters* Later on he gets WORSE, his multiple personallities merge and he starts speaking in what i can only describe as "Cocaine Addict Speak", he can not stop talking IN ALL CAPS about murder and violence and how much he HATES society, the hero system, villains, his lot in life. Everyone that likes him just, kind of, ignores it, even if the only topic of conversation he can muster now is murder. Everyone that dislikes him is just there to get humiliated and to point out that he's quirkless and therefore less than human. That's another thing, i don't think there ever was any kind of discrimination against quirkless except for Hero related jobs, quirks are basically irrelevant for most of society becouse its ILLEGAL to use them without a hero licence outside some very mundane activities, some people even lost their quirks and it was seen as a tragedy, being quirkless is a very "Unfortunate" event, its pittable, its the same as being a cripple or having some other disability, it would be like saying society today has this huge grudge against people in wheelchairs or people with Down's Syndrome, its just nonsense, even the people that feel unconfortable around them would still fake smile to pretend to be civil, even more so in a society that worships super heroes. Those are the 2 main points why it doesn't work, characters personalities twist and bend to acomodate this MC that can not stop killing people.

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