So far so good. I binge read it and must say it’s of really good quality. It doesn’t take things too far and generally knows when to move forward. The character familiarity and retention is quite well done, my only gripe (and something I accidentally do a lot as well), is that there is a lot of repetition in words being rephrased to be rewritten. But I do it too so I’m fine with it. Xeno/Sakuya approved.
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