Review Detail of procrastination04 in Katakuri of Fairy Tail

I really wanted to like this. I really did, but this ain't happening. So, let's get into why I don't think this is a good story. After the first few chapters, it became apparent that this is some kind of translation since "Guild Mark" was translated into coat of arms, "Guildmaster" into President... The MC buys a bunch of jellybeans so he can flick and use them as weapons. This is solely done for "cool" factor because he could've gathered a bunch of pebbles and achieved the same without wasting both food and money. After getting their Magic unlocked, Erza doesn't awaken her natural Telekinesis, rather she immediately gets Requip. Oops, sorry, I meant Infinte Bladeworks because she can apparently summons swords even though she had never stored any in her pocket space. And of course Makarov immediately recognizes as Requip instead of Sword Magic or Sword-Make because obviously everyone knows that Requip summons swords, right? The timeline is completely messed up without a single care in the world. Erza was supposed to be the third to arrive to FT after Gray and Cana, and yet, here, Mira and her siblings were already there even though Erza was never taken to the Tower. Oh, and Natsu is also here, just so the timeline could be completely and utterly destroyed, messing up so much events that would most certainly not be taken into account when writing future chapters.