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Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv41yr
2023-07-23 22:19

Sigh~It lacks something, something crucial, like greed, maturity, romance and other aspects.Let me be blunt here, the story is boring extremely boring, Mc behaves more and more inhumanly and it's hard to ignore he is a reincarnated person, especially 3 times for f..k sake. Having a slice-of-life concept without romance is outright hellish plain and uninteresting. THE MAIN THING IS WHY THE HEL* DID HE MAKE STUPID PRANKS LIKE A KID WITH SOMEONE YOU BARELY KNOW, the pranking concept is disgusting here, especially how he started calling Rimiru his mother or father, DISGUSTING...

Shadow Monarch in Tensura

TheRandomMe
4.5
102 Chs

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Artemis099
Artemis099Lv12

thanks for saying that, now i aint reading that

1yr
Yuuga_1890
Yuuga_1890Lv1

(Google Translate) Really… at the beginning it was fine, as it had only a few problems such as the interaction between the protagonist and his childhood friends being very forced and unnatural, but until then it was ok, but since the protagonist started doing his "pranks" with Ramiris, the story has been getting worse and worse, the protagonist no longer had his own personality and only did what the author wanted him to do, so that you gave the protagonist a tragic backstory if you went to throw it all away? Well… I will follow up to the end, whether the author discards it or not, and I will make a detailed review of each thing that I didn't like and that I liked (there were few)

1yr
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Asagrimnir
AsagrimnirLv10

The main character's excessive emotional dependency on others undermines their autonomy, inhibits personal growth, and perpetuates a cycle of unfulfillment. It's crucial to cultivate self-reliance and inner strength for a truly fulfilling journey of self-discovery. #EmotionalIndependenceMatters

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obero34_
obero34_Lv4

personally i think most of a fanfiction's fun comes from the author's ability to come up with a good idea to integrate into story and i personally liked this one a lot i have also read a lot of tensura fics and overall its always better when the main character starts before the cannon smh maybe its just me but fics like "reincarnated in tensura way too early" always seemed to hit it better than the rest and this fic is no exception either combining that with good writing with bare minimum grammar mistakes and all you get a very good fanfiction (a bit spoiler down ahead) whenever you see an author putting his mc in the actual timeline that chloe(chronoa) goes through you know the author has read the entire tensura LN and knows what he is doing like seriously why do all the authors insist on making their mc an anomaly in timeline?timeline is already complicated enough with chronoa there is no reason for the MC to make it even worse

1yr
Obasikene_Tochukwu_8615
Obasikene_Tochukwu_8615Lv4

Still too few chapters but It's on my reading list

1yr
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

after reading the title 'shadow monarch in tensura' all i can say is; this novel is pure disappointment. everything with the exception of the MC is kinda meh, and the mc himself is worst then meh, you couldn't have chosen a worse person than the mc to be the new shadow monarch.

1yr
Albanian_Gamer
Albanian_GamerLv5

.....................,..................

1yr
God_of_Failure
God_of_FailureLv4

if you like emotional mc who will care for any one just because they say you are there friend or family then you will like him ... he also has reason for that *childhood neglect and abuse*.... it's like watching a Moth go after light after not having in his whole life

1yr
Blake_Silver
Blake_SilverLv4

It’s not bad but not amazing either? maybe my expectations were too high as I just left of reading one of the best fanfics I know but this is meh. Read the first chapters fast but I’ kinda dropping off as the story progresses. I hope it gets more interesting I’ll try to keep an eye on it

1yr
Egoless
EgolessLv4

Great fanfic, it is a good read, sure its a bit fast paced but its ending was well written heavily recommend you all to give this fic a read.

1yr
Shubhamtripathi033
Shubhamtripathi033Lv14

i don't know if you tried to make it cooler or something but the women knowing mc powers kinda killed my interest so dropping it. bye thx for atleast making a novel on tensura world.

1yr
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