Hmm, i love how the whole story is set on one particular character... I don't know How the story is Going to End but i read through Chapter 5, waiting for 6, so he's a dreamer boy, i actually don't know how Dylan is going to end up, How curious can a person be to go through an unknown Door, also you should've specified his Age so that we would know his level of naivety... Asides that the story is good, i love it, please keep it up..
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