Review Detail of hero4hire in MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Villain
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I was excited to read this but author's respose to some of the comment ruined it for me. "if you don't like my story, write it yourself" is stupid response to a constructive criticism. If you choose to publish your story you will receive both good and bad review. If you cant take it then write in your little diary and hid it under your bed, princess. you are not ready for the real world.
MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Villain
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Nar_cisse:I think I know exactly what comment you are talking about - and someone telling me that I ‘ruined’ it by writing a story with chakra and that I ‘should’ have made it a story with a twin brother of Todoroki is not a constructive criticism - it is someone who plainly tell me what to do and nothing else. I always enjoy constructive criticism and try to interact with readers who write them because I want to improve as a writer as a whole, but again, telling someone (rudely, at that) what to do simply because it doesn’t fit you taste is not constructive criticism. Anyway, thank you for the review.
I think I know exactly what comment you are talking about - and someone telling me that I ‘ruined’ it by writing a story with chakra and that I ‘should’ have made it a story with a twin brother of Todoroki is not a constructive criticism - it is someone who plainly tell me what to do and nothing else. I always enjoy constructive criticism and try to interact with readers who write them because I want to improve as a writer as a whole, but again, telling someone (rudely, at that) what to do simply because it doesn’t fit you taste is not constructive criticism. Anyway, thank you for the review.
It is not a Sharingan as in the bloodline limit, it is a fuinjutsu made Sharingan - which is just the basics ability (better visual acuity and slower perceptions). There won't be no mangekyo or any bloodline.
1stDrunkenImmortal:Chakra in MHA is trash quirks already give you a wide range of abilities to work with and chakra added makes it to op, but I haven’t read much since I saw he had the sharingan bc it’s the most broken ability to have from Naruto.
Nar_cisse:I think I know exactly what comment you are talking about - and someone telling me that I ‘ruined’ it by writing a story with chakra and that I ‘should’ have made it a story with a twin brother of Todoroki is not a constructive criticism - it is someone who plainly tell me what to do and nothing else. I always enjoy constructive criticism and try to interact with readers who write them because I want to improve as a writer as a whole, but again, telling someone (rudely, at that) what to do simply because it doesn’t fit you taste is not constructive criticism. Anyway, thank you for the review.
your right He's telling why ir how about which is suggesting not ordering he's telling you that you should do this and that that's basically telling the author to change there story literally which plain stupid and rude
Nar_cisse:I think I know exactly what comment you are talking about - and someone telling me that I ‘ruined’ it by writing a story with chakra and that I ‘should’ have made it a story with a twin brother of Todoroki is not a constructive criticism - it is someone who plainly tell me what to do and nothing else. I always enjoy constructive criticism and try to interact with readers who write them because I want to improve as a writer as a whole, but again, telling someone (rudely, at that) what to do simply because it doesn’t fit you taste is not constructive criticism. Anyway, thank you for the review.